Hello to all of you.
We have developed the first version of the flyer for the project. Note that there are two things that are completely provisional:
- There are organizations that hasn´t sent their logos in a good quality, so maybe some logos aren´t the right ones or have a poor quality.
- The web page for the project is not defined yet.
We have tried to do a simple and clear flyer. Feel free to make any suggestion (would appreciate it)
Maybe this is one question we can discuss next wednesday.
Best regards to all of you
Hi David,
You've made a good job but i have some suggestions:
First i think some logos are not enough in a good quality so please try to find others in a higher quality
Second, i think you ve made a very good summary of our project but i fear it is not very attractive to read ( i refer on the second page) It looks like a plan with all this points.May be you can make a diagram to explain our target group or our aims or our methodology.
Third, on the first page you forget "life improvement for FOOD for the elderly". And the website is not the good one www.biolife.com already exists. So we have to find another one
I hope my suggestions are going to help you.
Regards and see you wednesday to discuss on this flyer.
Olivier
Posted by: Olivier | 16/05/2011 at 14:16
Hi Olivier.
- First: Regarding the logos, and as I said on the post, some of the organizations didn´t answer to the petition of sending the logos, so the meeting of wednesday will be a good time to remind that request.
- Second: Ok, we will wait for the other ones opinions and try to improve that part of the flyer.
- Third: you´re completely right with the first part. For the website, we knew the webpage was not defined yet, so it was a mere example.
Posted by: David Santos | 16/05/2011 at 14:30
Hi David,
I am agree with you, for the second point we need the opinions from the others participants before to change the flyer, this comment is only my opinion about the this part of the flyer
Posted by: Olivier | 16/05/2011 at 16:22